posted on : 2 April 2010
i know you are suffering too
its so many things for you
is it even me?
but for me its you
every 24 hours seem so long, not without you
every 24 hours so less in the hope of meeting you
missing at every radii of mine
i feel so alone with you as your memories
for me its just you
you are gone so long
for things were calling you
far important in life
suffering for so many things new
and things you looking for
but
is it even me?
for me its just you
looking at the mirror
all I can find is you
though it holds my image too
when i break my gaze you disappear
n yet I dont appear
i may climb mountains
or drown by the shallow rivers
be by the cemetery
or in lively parties
theres always a web
connected to past present n future of you
my lips may smile
but eyes remain contorted
unless its you in flesh and blood
or breathing across the oceans
for me its just you
i wish all you do
all you suffer
vanish
when its Me.
and for you its Me as much,
as for me its You.
Very gently chosen words, and yet I had to read the poem 3 times to make sure I'm understanding the situation right! :) and yessssssss....I can very well relate to this one!
ReplyDeleteThere are a few things I would like to know, again possibly because I don't understand things in1go! LOL...sorry! Ok 1st: The lines - 'every 24 hours seem so long, not without you'. 24 hrs seem long NOT without your love by your side? Or is there a hidden meaning I don't get?
Absolutely loved the 4th verse..."when i break my gaze you disappear and yet I dont appear"! A BRILLIANT line!
Yet again, I couldn't grasp the last verse, after 'when its me.....' :( Please throw some light for me? SORRY! But I need to know what the writer wants to say and how she felt! :)
Overall, a swell work, really, because the emotions and feelings have been portrayed just the way they are being felt! :)